“Self-Made Warden”-My Screenplay 14th Page

INT. APPARTMENT BUILDING-                    14th page

Simon and Melissa enter the building,counter-girl stares at
them,Simon shows his bage.

SIMON
We’re cops…in which room Mr
Ben Miller lives?

She checks register.

COUNTER-GIRL
26.

SIMON
Thanks.

They heads away.

EXT. CORRIDOR-APPARTMENT 26-DAY

Simon knocks,after few moments door opens,a man appears,
early 40s,looks at Simon.

MAN
Yes?

SIMON
Ben Miller?

The mand nods,Simon shows his bage,Ben Miller open the
door fully.Simon and Melissa enter.

INT. LIVING ROOM-BEN’S APPARTMENT-DAY

Ben’s hands cofee cops to Melissa and Simon who are
sitting on sofa,Ben sits too.

BEN MILLER
I’d been known to him for just
few weeks…

MELISSA
But what you got ’bout his nature?

They sip their cofees.

BEN
I found’m little bit rude…
maybe it was cuz of tough study
or maybe he’s rude.

SIMON
Ever he quarreled with someone?

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4 thoughts on ““Self-Made Warden”-My Screenplay 14th Page

      1. yes you can, your blog is your window, don’t be negative maybe someone will like your screen play and who knows you become famous, don’t let go of your dreams

      2. thanks, Doris. Someone liked my screenplay. Hes screenwriter and hes my best friend now but I dont think so that this thing gonna work for me until I’m in an English speaking country. Have a great weekend

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